The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
The diagram illustrates the collection of rainwater for drinking usage in one Australian town.
Overall
, the process is composed of five steps, starting with collecting the rainwater and finishing by treating it with chemicals.
To begin
with, when it rains, raindrops are gathered
on the roof of each house, which slide down into the pipe at the side of each house, Wrong verb form
gather
then
goes
down through it. Wrong verb form
go
After
this
process, all the water
collects at the main tube that transfers it to the water
filter, to get rid of the dirt.
After being filtered, water
gets collected in a big storage that is
connected with
the Change preposition
to
water
treatment with a tube, where it gets treated with chemicals.
Finally
, all the small chemical substances differentiate from water
and move to the pipe which will transfer them the
out of the cycle.Correct article usage
apply
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