Bar graphs below provide information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2000 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2000 and 2010.
The bar graphs below provide details about the percentage of individuals who possess PC
as well as
their level of education between 2000 and 2010. Units are measured in percentages.
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Overall
, laptop proprietorship showed an upward trend throughout the period Linking Words
while
ownership by education level saw a similar rise. Despite Linking Words
this
, the lowest number of persons that held Linking Words
desktop
was those with no high school diploma, Fix the agreement mistake
desktops
whereas
the opposite was true with postgraduate degrees.
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Initially
, 50% of users purchased a notebook in 2000, Linking Words
whereas
more than 75% held one in 2010. The second most popular year for intellectual machine holding was 2008 with more than 76% owning one. Linking Words
However
, the percentage of computer custody in 2002 and 2004 was almost the same (60% and 65%, respectively).
A noticeable trend showed that the higher the education level the higher the percentage of people having computers. Individuals with no high school diploma had the lowest rate Linking Words
for
computer Change preposition
of
purchase
, which was approximately 25%, Fix the agreement mistake
purchases
while
people with postgraduate degrees had the highest number of computers which was well over 75%.Linking Words
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