The graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 and 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reportin the main features, making comparisions where relevant

The graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 and 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reportin the main features, making comparisions where relevant
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The provided chart illustrates the percentage of four various substances comparing their recycling rate respectively between 1982 and 2010 in a specific nation.
Overall
, the proportion of paper&cardboard and glass containers was much higher than the remaining categories but the former still took the lead among others.
In addition
, there was a gradual increase in aluminium cans
while
hardly any variation in plastics throughout the whole period. To be more specific, beginning from 65%, a continual fluctuation happened over a period between 1982 and 1994,standing at 80%, and followed by a steady drop to 70% in 2010.
Moreover
, the year 1970 witnessed a sharp decline in the proportion of glass containers,
however
, a slight rise took place in 1994, and
finally
a significant growth of 10% from 1994 to 2010.
Furthermore
, in terms of Aluminini cans, it started from 1986, accounting for approximately 5%, and
then
it steadily rose during the 16-year period from 1986 to 2002, eventually reaching 25% in 2002. After that, the percentage of aluminium cans dramatically soared to 45% in 2010. In the end, there was only a little change in the percentage of plastic since it consistently remained stable no more than 10%.
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