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The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the clothing
export
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 values from
Colombia
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,
Japan
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, and
Myanmar
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 from 1999 to 2003.
Overall
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,
Japan
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 and
Colombia
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 showed relatively steady trends, with both
countries
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 ending the period at similar levels.
In contrast
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,
Myanmar
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, which started with the lowest
export
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 value, experienced significant fluctuations. In 1999,
Myanmar
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 had the lowest clothing
export
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 value among the
three
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countries
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, but by 2000, it had surged to approximately 800
million
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dollars
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, the highest for that year. Meanwhile,
Colombia
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 went up to nearly 500
million
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dollars
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,
whereas
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Japan
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 experienced a moderate decrease. Between 2000 and 2001, clothing exports from all
three
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countries
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 increased slightly.
However
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, in 2002,
Myanmar
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's
export
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 value dropped dramatically to around 350
million
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dollars
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, making it the lowest among the
three
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countries
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. By the end of the period, both
Japan
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 and
Colombia
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 experienced a dip, with their
export
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 values at about 500
million
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dollars
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 and 600
million
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dollars
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, respectively.
Myanmar
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 escalated to 420
million
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dollars
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,
remained
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which remained
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 the lowest among the
three
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countries
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.
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