Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart illustrates
about
Change preposition
apply
film
which Fix the agreement mistake
films
was
watched in 2001 in the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
UK
and Australian cinemas
, while
; the line graph demonstrates the fluctuated
condition which Replace the word
fluctuating
had
occurred between 1975 to 2005 in Unnecessary verb
apply
ticket
sales in the UK
and Australian cinemas
. When considered together, there is no correlation between the two sets of data.
In both
countries, US Films were dominating the shares of movie genres that are watched by giving contribution
Correct article usage
a contribution
for
approximately 65% in Australia and nearly 77% for the Change preposition
of
UK
cinemas
. On the
contrary
hand, there are slight Correct word choice
other
difference
Fix the agreement mistake
differences
for
the second position in Change preposition
in
both
countries, UK
films put up about 20% in UK
cinemas
, but in Australia other movies were giving
about 17%.
There was a huge fluctuation in Wrong verb form
gave
ticket
admissions between 1975 to 2005, nevertheless
; both
countries experienced a hike in 2005 compared to 1975. In the UK
, the biggest rise occurred between 2000 to 2002, which is about 30 million ticket
admission
. For Fix the agreement mistake
admissions
the
Australians, the line has a calmer fluctuation compared to the Correct article usage
apply
UK
’s, the biggest climb up happened between 1990 to
1995 which valued about 40 million Correct word choice
and
ticket
purchases.
In conclusion, even though both
charts have a similar topic which is about cinemas
and movies, these charts are not correlated because they are
not Verb problem
do
discussing
the same subject.Wrong verb form
discuss
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, cinemas, ticket, both with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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