Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart compares the number of
films
which were shown in the
UK
and Australia in 2001,
while
the line chart represents the
cinema
admission in both countries from 1976 to 2006.
To begin
with, both
Australian
and
British
shared the same
likely
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in the US Film, with a nearly similar percentage of the shares at over 65%.
Australian
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Australians
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had seen much more
UK
and other
films
, at 20% and 5%, respectively, compared to the ones produced by their own country.
Furthermore
, it is obvious that the
British
much enjoyed their own produced movies, with 20% of
films
screened, followed by
Australian
and other
films
as the least, placed at under 5%. Looking at
the
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cinema
attendance, in 1975, about 100
million
British
watched movies in cinemas
while
this
was just around 30
million
for
Australian
. In a decade, Australia's movie
admisison
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admission
still remained stable
while
the
UK
's experienced a downward number to under 60 attendees, but afterwards steadily went up with some minor fluctuations.
Australian
movie-goers reached a number of 80
million
attendees in 2005,
while
on the contrary
, almost 160
million
British
went to
cinema
halls- almost double
than
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apply
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that of Australians.
Overall
, the
UK
had a greater preference in the market and reception of
cinema
than Australia
between
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during
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the given time span.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words films, uk, cinema, australian, british, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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