The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts depict exports between the US and Vietnam, using millions in units.
Overall
, both countries have five categories. In the US, it has "coffee", "garments", "rice", "seafood", and "fruit and vegetables". Then
coffee is its major export. In another country, Vietnam has "aircraft parts", "cars", "cotton", "fertiliser' and "machinery", and the majority of exports are the aircraft parts.
To begin
with, the highest proportion of the US exports is coffee, with 23 million
dollars
. In contrast
, garments account for the lowest rate, which comprises 2 million
dollars
. Rice and sealed have a similar pattern, making up 4.3 and 4.4 million
dollars
, respectively. As for fruit and vegetables, they represent a moderate proportion (16 million
dollars
).
Looking at another country in detail, aircraft part is the majority of products to export in Vietnam, which shows 12 million
dollars
. Next,
machinery accounts for 30.5 million
dollars
and fertiliser constitutes 16.5 million
dollars
. Ultimately, cotton is the lowest rate of goods to export, which accounts for 12 million
dollars
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