You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter * introduce yourself * ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes * explain why you need to break the contract.

Good afternoon, dear sir/madam. My name is Anastassia, I'm the tenant in one of your flats. First of all, I wanted to express my
sencirely
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sincerely
gratitudes
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for your help and wonderful work - yours' and your's staff.
Furthermore
, there was a great
pleasant
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to get your help, and I have had 10 amazing months in
this
flat.
Secondly
, I wanted you to know that I evaluated
you
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your
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agensy
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agency
with the best possible grade
in
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on
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your website and
in
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on
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the other social media.
Moreover
, I'd
recomended
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recommend
recommended
your agency to all my friends - students of your city's university. You are doing the best work.
Unfortunally
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Unfortunately
, I have some family
issue
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issues
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, and I have to break my contract and leave
to
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for
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my country two months
befor
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before
the end of the contract. My contract is up to 1.8.2024.
I'm ask
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I'm asking
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you to help me one more time to get out without fees - my mom
have
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has
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to get surgery and it'll cost a lot for our family. I beg for your help Thanks a lot, best regards. Anastassia
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There are several spelling and grammar mistakes that need correction. For example, 'sencirely' should be 'sincerely' and 'your's' should be 'your.' Attention to these details can enhance clarity.
coherence cohesion
While the overall structure is good, some paragraphs could be more focused. For instance, the first paragraph contains both gratitude and an evaluation. Split these ideas to improve clarity.
task achievement
Include a specific request for any official process required to break the contract without incurring fees, as this will make your request clearer and more professional.
coherence cohesion
The opening greeting and closing are polite and appropriate, showing good understanding of formal letter writing.
task achievement
The tone throughout the letter is respectful and appropriate for the situation, which strengthens the task achievement.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • lease agreement
  • contract termination
  • early exit
  • relocation
  • sublet
  • notice period
  • penalty clause
  • new tenant
  • agency fee
  • vacate
  • unforeseen circumstances
  • mutual agreement
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