You would like to rent a car for a holiday. Write to the car rental agency. In your letter • Explain what type of car you would like • Give details of when you would like the car • Request more information about the cost
Dear sir,
I would like to rent a car next week. I will travel with my family to the United States for five
week
.
My family have seven members Change to a plural noun
weeks
included
my spouse, four children and a pet. We should arrive Wrong verb form
including
to
Chicago, IL on 12th October and we will Change preposition
in
departue
before Correct your spelling
departure
depart
a
December from Los Angeles, CA
Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, we need to
a big space car, that has Change preposition
apply
to
seven seats available, most Change preposition
apply
important
it should one way rent. Do you have a Replace the word
importantly
vain
, which is brand Correct your spelling
van
the
Toyota, is it possible latest model and young aged vehicle? BecauseCorrect article usage
apply
,
our children Remove the comma
apply
are need
a more comfortable trip Change the verb form
need
while
a way
. I prefer Correct your spelling
away
to
Change preposition
apply
a
newest car.
You can don't Change the article
the
worrying
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worry
for
my pet. she Change preposition
about
get
well training and she has full Change the verb form
gets
accesories
.
Our flight Correct your spelling
accessories
is
would land at 12p.m, So should I check in Unnecessary verb
apply
afternoon
, at 2p.m in Add an article
the afternoon
the
O'Hare International Correct article usage
apply
airport
? How Capitalize word
Airport
many
will be cost per day? We have to return it Correct quantifier usage
much
in
the LAX airport after five Change preposition
to
week
in the morning before at 9.00 a.m. Could you send me for email Change to a plural noun
weeks
the
information Change preposition
with the
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about some
some
driver's Correct determiner usage
the
request
and Fix the agreement mistake
requests
total
cost all Correct article usage
the total
of
includedChange preposition
apply
.
I am Change the punctuation
?
waiting
your Add the preposition
waiting for
respond
. Thank you.Replace the word
response
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coherence
When listing details like travel dates and times, ensure they are clearly and accurately described. Consider breaking complex sentences into simpler ones for clarity.
task response
Re-read the letter for grammatical errors and possible misunderstandings, especially in terms of specific requests like vehicle requirements and payment details.
task response
Good introduction of the purpose of the letter and clear mention of travel details such as dates and places.
coherence
The letter addresses various specific needs, i.e., number of seats, type of vehicle, timing, and comfort requirements, demonstrating attention to detail.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,