You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter * introduce yourself * ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes * explain why you need to break the contract.

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Dear Sir Johan, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I want to leave the flat next month. I present the details in

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letter. In the beginning, my name is Rabeb. I'm the teacher

how

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who

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rent

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rents

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the

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apply

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flat number 2 on the second floor , near the

faculty

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of business administration.

Alose

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, I lived at

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flat on 30 August 2023 and my contract will finish on 30 July 2024.

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, I want Lo

leave

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to leave

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the flat on 15 May because I have my reasons.

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, I will leave the flat before the contract finishes. And I ask you Sir to permit for me to leave. Indeed, I mentioned in the beginning that I'm a teacher. In

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context, the administration of my

faculty

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inform

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informs

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me that she

need

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needs

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my help

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with

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the second

faculty

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other city

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another city

other cities

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. As

result

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a result

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, I need to stay

full time

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full-time

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in the other city.

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I'm oblige

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I'm obliged

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to search

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for a

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new flat near the new

faculty

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, I hope

gratefully

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you gratefully

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apply

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accept my apology for

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apply

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leaving the flat before the contract finishes and I

wait

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wait for

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your response to my request. Yours Sincerely Rabeb

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph clearly conveys one main idea to avoid confusion. This will improve the logical flow of your letter.

coherence cohesion

Polish the introduction and conclusion of the letter. While they are good, they could be slightly more informative to make your request clearer.

task achievement

Clarify your reasons for leaving in a more straightforward manner. This will help make your task response stronger and more compelling.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing of the letter are polite and appropriate, contributing to a respectful tone.

task achievement

The letter effectively addresses the task requirements by introducing yourself, stating your request and explaining your reasons.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

lease agreement
contract termination
early exit
relocation
sublet
notice period
penalty clause
new tenant
agency fee
vacate
unforeseen circumstances
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