The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram below presents the process of creating biofuel which is
ethanol
in a few steps starting with energy from different sources to make the outcome ethanol
and spend
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it
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planes
Overall
, the process starts with income energy specifically sunlight and carbon dioxide, to create ethanol
to produce carbon dioxide again.
Firstly
, The first step requires energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide to use in plants and trees grow, Then
Pre-processing to produce cellulose and use it to make sugar that is
used to transform into microbes added then
finally
the main outcome is ethanol
that is
used in many different ways, for example
: cars, plane، and a truck, this
continue again in plants and trees grow.Submitted by tasneematrash3001 on
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