You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The plans below show the site of an airport now and how itwill look after redevelopment nextyear. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting themain features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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of an airport between the present and after redevelopment next year.

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, in the redevelopment, the airport will be enlarged to provide more gate and service facilities than the present. Clearly, the entrance of departures and arrivals will be all increased to 2 next year, rather than only 1 entrance at present. The cafe in the departures will

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to the left side and its original site will be placed for Check-in. The position of Check-in will be added

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Bag drop. In the redevelopment of arrivals, a cafe, ATM and Car hire will be added to its right side. The passport control, customs and security will remain as same as the present, the shops will be constructed at the upper of security. The arrangement of gates will

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to be a shape like "Y", the number of

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will rise from 8 to 18.

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to the gates will be replaced by the Sky train.

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clarity

Revise the sentence 'The cafe in the departures will be remove to the left side and its original site will be placed for Check-in.' for clarity. Consider: 'The cafe in departures will be moved to the left side, and the original site will be replaced by the Check-in counter.'

conclusion

Improve the conclusion to better summarize the main changes and impacts. Add a statement reflecting the overall improvement or functionality.

specific examples

Provide more specific examples to illustrate the changes clearly and check for grammatical errors, particularly verb tense and subject-verb agreement.

comparison

The essay effectively identifies and compares main features, including the increase in the number of gates and the additional services.

structure

Good use of organizational structures to show before-and-after differences.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

166 words

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