The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.

The chart below shows the average cost of monthly contract for four different mobile (cell phones) in a European country from January to September 2002, measured in euro.
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The chart shown provides data on standard recurrent prices for four network operating companies in a known European nation over a 9-month year period of 2002.
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most of the mobile phone service companies showed considerable increases in their cost, Alpha Services stood out from its fellow colleagues showing an extensive rise in its prices with SimTX being the only entity to record a marginal fall. On the one hand, in the beginning, the monthly costs of having a Domo mobile phone were relatively quite high compared to other businesses with just 15
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which was 3 times that of Alpha mobile services.
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, though Domo still maintained their place and reached 25
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in July, they
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fell slightly in the final month with roughly 2
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to settle approximately at 23
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which was enough for Alpha to take the lead in September peaking at 25
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per month. The cost of Lex cellphones
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rose marginally over the period, unfortunately, it was not quite high enough when compared with its contenders settling at just about 17
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every month.
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, SimTX showed a promising start as the year progressed steadily with just under 10
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in January
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climaxing to nearly 14
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in June before a drop towards the end of the period of about half the price of its previous position.
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