The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table gives a

comparsion

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comparison

of the

population

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of New Zealand from the

years

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2011 and 2012 showing 4 different age groups which are under 15, 15-39, 40-64 and people over 65

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. The proportion of

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population

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during these two

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also

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provided

as well as

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the total

population

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during each year.

Overall

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, we see that there has been a rise

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total

population

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when comparing 2011 to 2012, leaving the percentage of

change

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to be 0.6. The age group which has the highest percentage of

change

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is the 65 over category

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not the same case for

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the under

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15 and 15-39

group

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. From a higher

population

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in 2011, there has been a slight fall in numbers in 2012, leaving

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apply

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0.2

percent

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per cent

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population

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the population

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in both categories. The age group 40-64 has

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shown

significant

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rise in numbers when comparing the two

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but the

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aged 65 and above skyrocketed. From a

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of only 573,946 people aged above 65 in 2011 to around 596,903 people. The

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change

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also

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increased massively, resting at approximately 4.0

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, years, change with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

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4
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

184 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

population growth
age group
increase
decline
elderly population
aging population
working-age population
stable labor force
modest increase
significant change

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