The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives a
comparsion
of the Correct your spelling
comparison
population
of New Zealand from the years
2011 and 2012 showing 4 different age groups which are under 15, 15-39, 40-64 and people over 65 years
. The proportion of change
in population
during these two years
is also
provided as well as
the total population
during each year.
Overall
, we see that there has been a rise of
total Change preposition
in
population
when comparing 2011 to 2012, leaving the percentage of change
to be 0.6. The age group which has the highest percentage of change
is the 65 over category whereas
its
not the same case for Replace the word
it's
it is
under
15 and 15-39 Correct article usage
the under
group
. From a higher Fix the agreement mistake
groups
population
in 2011, there has been a slight fall in numbers in 2012, leaving a
0.2 Correct article usage
apply
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
population
in both categories.
The age group 40-64 has Add an article
the population
also
shown significant
rise in numbers when comparing the two Add an article
a significant
years
but the population
aged 65 and above skyrocketed. From a population
of only 573,946 people aged above 65 in 2011 to around 596,903 people. The percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
change
also
increased massively, resting at approximately 4.0 percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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