You have heard that your company is organising a language training abroad for a limited number of participants. Write a letter of interest state your position in the company explain why they should include you in the training Explain how training could benefit you and your company.

Good afternoon, dear sir. My name is Anastassia, from the Palliative Department. I
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that our hospital had organised a language training in one of the US hospitals. I'll be really glad to participate in
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Nurse Practitioner, joined
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the Palliative Department, and
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may increase the status of our division
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an international rate. I have some ideas about the theme of
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research, but unfortunately,
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my ongoing English lessons. In conclusion, I'm convinced, that
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my English skills to the appropriate grade.
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Include a more formal greeting and salutation to maintain a professional tone. Consider addressing the letter to a specific person if possible.
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Ensure that each paragraph presents a single, clear idea. For instance, consider separating details of your qualifications and your reasons for wanting to join the training into distinct paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Use connecting words and phrases to improve the logical flow of sentences and paragraphs.
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The letter is polite and demonstrates genuine interest in the language training opportunity.

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