You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The picture displays the
process
of energy production using coal.
Overall
, it is a man-made, eight-step, and linear
process
. It begins with coal delivery using tracks and ends with electricity production. The electricity that will be produced can be used to operate the generators that have been used throughout the
processo
Correct your spelling
process
. The
process
starts with inserting the coal into the furnace
together with
oxygen. After that, the produced
gas
will go through a
process
of CO2, Mercury, and sulfur removal.
Subsequently
, the purified syngas will be pumped into a
gas
turbine which is operated by an electric
generator
. The
gas
turbine will pump the purified
gas
into a heat recovery
steam
generator
.
This
recovery
steam
generator
will produce
steam
and flue gases.
Finally
, the
steam
will be used to switch the
steam
turbine which in turn moves the electric
generator
. The electricity that has been produced, can be used to operate the
generator
that has been used in the
gas
Pumping
process
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, gas, generator, steam with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • combustion
  • thermal energy
  • boil
  • turbines
  • mechanical energy
  • generator
  • electrical energy
  • transmitted
  • power lines
  • furnace
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