The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two maps depict the current layout of the university's centre and the proposed future plan. The primary difference between the present and proposed layouts is the expansion of the business centre. The area is set to become more developed, featuring additional facilities and several new rooms. In the current layout, a 25-meter deep pool is centrally located, with a gym situated to the north. The changing room is positioned on the west side,
while
the seating area is on the east side. Upon entering, individuals first encounter the reception, which is located to the south of the pool.
Additionally
, the university's play centres are placed between the outdoor courts. In the proposed future plan, the pool will retain its length and depth,
while
the gym is planned to be expanded.
Moreover
, two dance studios will be added on the east side of the map. New changing rooms will be constructed in the southwest and southeast corners. A sports shop and a cafe will be situated adjacent to the changing rooms, with the sports shop in the southeast and the cafe in the southwest.
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