The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.
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From an
overall
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perspective, it is starkly apparent that private vehicles were the most popular commuting tool,
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taxis gained the least
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.
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, going forward residents showed less tendency for walking illustrating a more sedentary lifestyle.
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rigorous scrutiny reveals that in 1995 automobiles accounted for the highest portion with 3199 followed by other types and local buses with 450 and 429 respectively. The
forth
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transportation means was
train
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with almost 290 passengers and
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amount diminished by almost 30 when it came to
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commuters. Taxi was the least sought-after means. As regards 2000, it can be deduced that most of the figures saw an upward trend,
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, some, including pedestrians, bicycle riders, and local bus users had a downward trend.
Bicycle
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The bicycle
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was the least
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one in 2000.
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