Sugar
level
onChange preposition
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prepackaged
food
indeedAdd a missing verb
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high compared to natural
sugar
contained in fruits or vegetables. Too much consumed canned
food
and drink
products
would cause
people
many
health
issueChange to a plural noun
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in the near future.
Therefore
,
this
essay
wouldWrong verb form
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discuss whether processed
food
with
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high-levelCorrect your spelling
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of
sugar
should be made more high-priced in order to encourage
people
to consume less
sugar
.
To begin
with, fabricated
sugar
contained in processed
food
is likely
endangerAdd the particle
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humanCorrect article usage
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body.
many
people
still do not know how many grams of
sugar
carriedAdd a missing verb
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within prepackaged
goods
.
Due to
itsCorrect pronoun usage
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delicious taste and good
advertisementFix the agreement mistake
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that Correct word choice
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these sugary
products
madeVerb problem
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,
from Change preposition
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children to elderly
people
would Verb problem
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voluntarily and continuously consume high
levelFix the agreement mistake
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sugarChange preposition
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in their daily
lifeFix the agreement mistake
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.
Nevertheless
, the education
ofChange preposition
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the possible
health
riskFix the agreement mistake
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done by the
should suffice to make
people
reduce their
sugar
ingestion.
Hence
, thats not
allCorrect determiner usage
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, majority of
people
still ignore these
health
risks–including high blood pressure, obesity, and even diabetes–and continue to eat sugary
goods
, for
aCorrect article usage
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reason that they still do not feel their
bodyFix the agreement mistake
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damaged by these
sugar
products
.
OtherChange the wording
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solution is to make sweetened
products
more expensive by
risingCorrect your spelling
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itsChange the word
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company’s tax. By applying
this
regulation, the fabricated beverages and drinks corporation will evaluate their business and profoundly will come to a conclusion, which is reducing
theirChange the word
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non-healthy
sugar
level
onChange preposition
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their
products
.
In addition
, if these
corporatesReplace the word
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ignore
this
regulation and continue to sell their
goods
withChange preposition
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additionalAdd an article
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priceFix the agreement mistake
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, undoubtedly
this
would
backfiredChange the verb form
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themChange preposition
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. Higher
priceFix the agreement mistake
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demandsCorrect subject-verb agreement
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more money from the consumers,
forCorrect word choice
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that reason
people
would retreat
theirChange preposition
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desire to consume
such
pricy
products
.
Thus
, residents would unconsciously eat less
sugar
.
To sum up
,
risingCorrect your spelling
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the price of fabricated sugary
products
is one of the
solutionChange to a plural noun
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that can be applied to support a healthy diet for the residents. Education and champaign of
health
riskFix the agreement mistake
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impacted by
goods
are
another solutionFix the agreement mistake
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that can be done by the government, but the impact would not
sufficientAdd a missing verb
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due to
people
do not feel the practical
health
damage–
moreover
for children to adult consumers.
Accordingly
,
makeWrong verb form
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the
products
more expensive to purchase will make
majorityAdd an article
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of
people
think twice whether to shop
theseChange preposition
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sweetened
goods
is worth
orCorrect pronoun usage
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not.