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The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of plastics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph
illustrate
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illustrates
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 information about the project
how
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and how
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 plastics are recycled.
Overall
, Plastics are given a
circual
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circular
 process to reuse with 6 stages starting with buying and using and ending with newly recycled products.
Additionally
, the result of
recycle
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recycling
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 generates 2 objects with different processing
procedure
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procedures
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. First and foremost, the shop supports new
produces
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products
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 to customers, who purchase and use them for
the
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a
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 variety of purposes. After
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the useage
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useage
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usage
 project, which divides
to
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into
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 bottles, bags and rubbish. Among these, bags and rubbish are buried in landfill sites. Meanwhile, bottles, which
made
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are made
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 with plastics, are collected and moved to the sorting house by the truck for recycling. After being gathered, the
recyled
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recycled
 bottles are reprocessed in
speclizied
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specialised
 facilities. which are recycled to make new ones.
Finally
, these new, recycled plastic products are distributed back to the retail shops where they are sold, reused and discarded
one
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once
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 again , thereby continuing the process
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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