You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The diagram provides information about how energy is produced from coal. In

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essay, I will discuss the process of producing energy from coal.

Overall

, there are three main sources to start

this

process

such

the

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coal,

the

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oxygen and furnace

machine

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machines

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First

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step

is starting

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when the coal and the oxygen enter into machine.

Then

, the process includes two things: slag and raw syngas. Raw syngas remove CO2 mercury sulfur and

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

73 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Developments in science and technology have caused environmental problems.Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment,whileothers believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Billions of dollars are being wasted on space research. The money used could be better if used to improving condition on people on earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, the crimes rate amongst underaged people has been rising. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.

Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.