The graph shows the percentage of 15 year olds with low literacy (reading and writing) levels in four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the percentage of 15 year olds with low literacy (reading and writing) levels in four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the hospital entry for five hospitals in European continent countries,
such
as Forthsmith, Adlin, Stanton, Bardley, and Oxley in a 14-year period. Each point represents a
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patient
interval for that particular year, and there are several key features which are set out below.
First,
there were three hospitals that experienced an upward
trend
. Adlin had the highest person interval between the 14-year period, as he started with 110
patients
and had it doubled by 2018, which made him the second highest
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compared to Bardley, which had
lower
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a lower
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patient
interval than Adlin’s, but
higher
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a higher
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patient
count, as it started with 200
patients
and ended with 250
patients
by 2018. The third hospital with an upward
trend
is Stanton, which started with only 75
patients
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and built it up to 140 by 2018. Comparing these three made Stanton the lowest in
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of
patient
interval and
patient
count.
In contrast
, Fortsmith experienced a rather stable
trend
.
This
can be seen as it started with 165
patients
in 2004 and
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with only 170
patients
in 2008. Despite the stable
patient
interval, Fortsmith still had it high with 30
patients
ahead of Stanton’s, which had an upward
trend
. In conclusion, throughout the
14 years
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14-year
period, Bradley had the most
patients
compared to the other four countries.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words patient, trend, patients with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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