A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country. He/she has written to ask for your advice. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • describe why you think he/she will enjoy it • explain why you recommend studying at your university • give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ____________,

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Dear Gagan, Hope you are doing splendidly! I received your letter and

glad

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to know you want to study in India. Why

not

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don't

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you

take

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admission

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admitted

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my campus? If you get a chance to study

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my college which is LPU

college

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College

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science

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Science

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, you will be over the moon.

Firstly

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, there is a big lab where you can learn more.

Secondly

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, one of the

professor

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this

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science lab is very famous and

got

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has had

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many rewards in his life.

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, you will get

education

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an education

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from

best

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teachers.

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, I will be there too, which means you do not need to bother making new friends.

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this

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this

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insitute

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institute

has

speciality

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, they focus on practical subjects more

instead

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therortical

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theoretical

which I know, you will like. How you can apply? First of all, you have to scroll to

college

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the college

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website and submit

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application form followed by

fees

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payment.

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, you will receive an offer letter to join. Hopefully, you will

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agree

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with my suggestion. Excited to meet you soon. Best regards, Waris

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Advice

There are a few grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing that can make the letter slightly difficult to read. Consider proofreading your work or having someone else review it to catch those mistakes.

Advice

While the letter covers all points of the task, it could be more detailed at certain places. Adding more specific examples of what the university offers and how to apply would enhance the completeness.

Suitable Writing Tone

The letter maintains an appropriate and friendly tone throughout which is very suitable for a letter to a friend.

Logical Structure

Good use of a clear and direct approach to convey your points, making it easy to follow.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

176 words

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