1. The chart shows information about various professions in the UK and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
The chart illustrates information about several businesses in the UK and their salaries. The table illustrates the average working
hours
per week
for each business.
Overall
, it is clear that
the salary
after three
years
is higher than when started. Remarkably, the salary
when started and after three
years
as an underground driver is the highest while
the firefighter has the highest average working hours
weekly.
We can see that the underground driver is paid 50000 pounds
when started and about 51000 pounds
after three
years
if they work
36 hours
a week
on average; However
, the firefighter is only paid 40000 pounds
when started and about 41000 pounds
after three
years
when they work
55 hours
a week
on average.
Regarding police position, there is not much difference in salary
when started and after three
years
, each police receives about 20000 pounds
for the average working of 40 hours
per week
. Finally
, those who work
as nurses have the lowest salary
compared with the remaining professions, about 18000 pounds
when started and about 19000 pounds
after three
years
when they work
38 hours
every week
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