1. The chart shows information about various professions in the UK and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.

1. The chart shows information about various professions in the UK and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession.
The chart illustrates information about several businesses in the UK and their salaries. The table illustrates the average working
hours
per
week
for each business.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
salary
after
three
years
is higher than when started. Remarkably, the
salary
when started and after
three
years
as an underground driver is the highest
while
the firefighter has the highest average working
hours
weekly. We can see that the underground driver is paid 50000
pounds
when started and about 51000
pounds
after
three
years
if they
work
36
hours
a
week
on average;
However
, the firefighter is only paid 40000
pounds
when started and about 41000
pounds
after
three
years
when they
work
55
hours
a
week
on average. Regarding police position, there is not much difference in
salary
when started and after
three
years
, each police receives about 20000
pounds
for the average working of 40
hours
per
week
.
Finally
, those who
work
as nurses have the lowest
salary
compared with the remaining professions, about 18000
pounds
when started and about 19000
pounds
after
three
years
when they
work
38
hours
every
week
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, salary, three, years, pounds, work with synonyms.
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