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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned furure development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned furure development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The 2 Maps illustrate
Norbition
Correct article usage
the Norbition
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 industrial area at the moment and its development in the future.
Overall
, a lot of modifications can be observed after the forecast development.
According to
 the current
map
, there are 8 factories around the
square
 and a road that leads to the east.
In addition
, there is a river in the north of the
map
. Moving on to the future planned, all factories will be demolished and some facilities will be established. Shops and Medical
center
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centers
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 will be made in the
South east
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Southeast
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 and South west of the
square
, respectively.
Furthermore
,
School
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the School
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 will be established on the East of the
map
. A road will be created from the North of the
square
 to the North of the
map
 which will be
Separate
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a Separate
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 River with one bridge.
Additionally
, one small
square
 is going to be established in the south of the Old
Square
.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, square with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • existing features
  • industrial area
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • office buildings
  • proposed changes
  • new developments
  • green spaces
  • infrastructure improvements
  • compare
  • current industrial area
  • planned development
  • land use
  • aesthetics
  • functionality
  • potential benefits
  • drawbacks
  • local community
  • job creation
  • environmental impact
  • quality of life
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