The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned furure development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The 2 Maps illustrate

Norbition

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the Norbition

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industrial area at the moment and its development in the future.

Overall

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, a lot of modifications can be observed after the forecast development.

According to

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the current

map

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, there are 8 factories around the

square

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and a road that leads to the east.

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, there is a river in the north of the

map

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. Moving on to the future planned, all factories will be demolished and some facilities will be established. Shops and Medical

center

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centers

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will be made in the

South east

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Southeast

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and South west of the

square

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, respectively.

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School

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the School

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will be established on the East of the

map

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. A road will be created from the North of the

square

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to the North of the

map

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which will be

Separate

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a Separate

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River with one bridge.

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, one small

square

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is going to be established in the south of the Old

Square

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words map, square with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

147 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

existing features
industrial area
factories
warehouses
office buildings
proposed changes
new developments
green spaces
infrastructure improvements
compare
current industrial area
planned development
land use
aesthetics
functionality
potential benefits
drawbacks
local community
job creation
environmental impact
quality of life

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