The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
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The graph below shows the
percentage
of the residents in four different Asian countries: the Philippines, Malaysia
, Thailand
, and Indonesia
. Staying in cities from 1970 to 2020, including predictions in both 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, Malaysia
got the highest percentage
in the last
40 years, and Thailand
got the lowest, Indonesia
started with the lowest percentage
of the population living in cities compared to the other countries.
On the one hand, Indonesia
was the lowest in percentage
in the first ten years from 1970 to 1980, with about 10%, while
the Philippines got the highest percentage
with around 30%, Thailand
and Malaysia
were in the middle with around ( 20% and 30%).
On the other hand
, in the period of 1990 to 2040 Malaysia
increased in percentage
from around 30% to 80%, Indonesia
also
increased from 1970 to 2000 and from 2000 to 2040, while
the Philippines and Thailand
were stable.Submitted by tasneematrash3001 on
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