The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
trips
made by students aged 5-12 who
traveled
to and from school by various modes of transport in the Change the spelling
travelled
year
1990 and 2010. The total number of Fix the agreement mistake
years
trips
taken by children per year are
measured in millions.
In 1990, the highest and most preferred mode of transport was walking which reached Correct subject-verb agreement
is
to
a little above 12 Change preposition
apply
million
trips
per year, however
, the lowest would be children being car passengers. Using the bus was also
preferred by many students as it was safer and cheaper. Cycling was done a lot by students as well
as
it was easier to cycle to and from school.
In 2010, being car passengers drastically Correct word choice
and
increasd
from 4 Correct your spelling
increased
increase
million
trips
in 1990 to around 11 million
trips
in 2010. There has been
a massive drop Wrong verb form
was
for
walking to and from school in 2010 which fell from 12 Change preposition
in
million
to 6 million
. Cycling has also
significantly dropped to around 2 million
in 2010 as well. Taking the bus on the other hand
has slightly dropped but is still preferred by many.Submitted by preethiwilliams75 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words trips, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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