The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
trips
made by students aged 5-12 who
Use synonyms
traveled
to and from school by various modes of transport in the Change the spelling
travelled
year
1990 and 2010. The total number of Fix the agreement mistake
years
trips
taken by children per year Use synonyms
are
measured in millions.
In 1990, the highest and most preferred mode of transport was walking which reached Correct subject-verb agreement
is
to
a little above 12 Change preposition
apply
million
Use synonyms
trips
per year, Use synonyms
however
, the lowest would be children being car passengers. Using the bus was Linking Words
also
preferred by many students as it was safer and cheaper. Cycling was done a lot by students Linking Words
as well
Linking Words
as
it was easier to cycle to and from school.
In 2010, being car passengers drastically Correct word choice
and
increasd
from 4 Correct your spelling
increased
increase
million
Use synonyms
trips
in 1990 to around 11 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
trips
in 2010. There Use synonyms
has been
a massive drop Wrong verb form
was
for
walking to and from school in 2010 which fell from 12 Change preposition
in
million
to 6 Use synonyms
million
. Cycling has Use synonyms
also
significantly dropped to around 2 Linking Words
million
in 2010 as well. Taking the bus Use synonyms
on the other hand
has slightly dropped but is still preferred by many.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words trips, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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