Some people think that children should start at a very early age. But others believe that should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Joining
school
at a very young age
is a very common thing during this
time
.Some people support this
action while
others don't.I think children
should start going to school
when they are old enough.
Some people think, If a child starts going to school
at a very small age
. He or she will start learning skills that other children
do not know when they are young. like they can start reading and writing a language before they turn into a grown person.For example
,I was very young when i
started going to Change the capitalization
I
school
. I started reading and writing English at a very small age
while
other children
in my family did not know how to read and write English. It was just because i
started going to Change the capitalization
I
school
at a young age
.
According to
some communities, a youngster will start going to college at a small age
. He will move away from his family and he will not be able to spend enough time
with his or her family.He will not be able to join family functions and other family events because these things will disturb his or her studies.For instance
,I joined the school
at a very young age
. I always feel like I am very far away from my family especially from my parents because I used to spend most of my time
doing my homework and preparing for my tests. I also
missed the wedding of my uncle because during that time
it was my exam so i
was preparing myself for my exam.
In conclusion, My opinion regarding joining Change the capitalization
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school
is that children
should join school
until they are older.Although
, there are advantages of joining school
early but disadvantages of joining school
at a young age
outweigh the advantages.Submitted by Saad Kamal on
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Try to provide a more balanced argument for both views, giving them equal weight before presenting your own opinion. This will make your essay appear more comprehensive and unbiased.
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Avoid repetition of points to enhance the clarity and succinctness of your ideas.
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You have provided relevant examples that support your points about the advantages and disadvantages of children starting school at an early age.
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You have a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps structure your essay well.