The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.
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The bar charts compare the
age
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and gender distribution of the populations of
France
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and India in 1984, presented in percentages.
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, it is evident that
France
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’s
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displayed more variation across
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groups,
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India’s
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showed a clear decline in numbers as
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increased. Notably, the life expectancy in
France
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was higher compared to India during
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period. In
France
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, the
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distribution resembled a bell shape. The percentages of infants and young adults in both genders were approximately 4%, followed by the middle-aged group (35-60 years old) at around 3%, and the elderly
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at less than 3%. It is noteworthy that the elderly
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over 70 years old in
France
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was predominantly female, with the male elderly
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being only half of the female figure.
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, India’s
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distribution was pyramid-shaped. Infants and young children had the highest proportion among all
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groups, at about 6-7% in both genders. Unlike in
France
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, the elderly
population
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(over 70 years old) in India was a minority but surprisingly slightly outnumbered those in the 65-70
age
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group.
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  • charts
  • age structure
  • populations
  • France
  • India
  • 1984
  • overall
  • different
  • evenly distributed
  • proportion
  • young people
  • elderly individuals
  • largest age group
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