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The chart gives detailed information about the percentages of people getting married across different age groups in the years 1996 and 2008.

The chart gives detailed information about the percentages of people getting married across different age groups in the years 1996 and 2008.
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The chart gives detailed information about the percentages of
people
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 getting married across different age groups in the years 1996 and 2008.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that the proportions of
people
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 getting married at the age of 16–19 were the lowest in both years,
whereas
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 those for
people
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 aged 25–29 were the highest.
Additionally
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, it is
also
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 worth mentioning that
females
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 accounted for the majority of individuals having a marriage in both years. Regarding the percentages in 1996,
while
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 the highest figures in the chart were seen in
people
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 aged 25–29, with
males
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 just under 12% (the highest figure) and
females
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 9%, proportions of 30-34-year-old individuals were high too, with
males
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 at 7% and
females
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 at 9%.
Following
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this
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, even though teenagers’ marriages were responsible for about 1% (the lowest figure), other categories were made up of 2–8%. When it comes to the percentages in 2008, it was still the same case as in 1996.
While
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 the trend of young
people
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 getting married was the greatest, with
males
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 just under 12% and
females
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 8%,
this
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 time, those for adults aged 30-34 were closer, with
males
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 at 8% and
females
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 at 11%.
Moreover
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, the percentage of youngsters having a marriage was still the lowest, at nearly 0.5%,
in contrast
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, the rest of the categories were responsible for proportions between 1-9%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, females, males with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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