The bar chart illustrated the amount of 4 types of wastes collected in a recycling centre during the period from 2011 to 2015. The 4 types of wastes were paper, glass, tins, and garden.
The bar chart demonstrates the
number
of waste collected by a recycling centre in 4 kinds between 2011 and 2015. Moreover
, units are measured in tons
. Overall
, the amount
of paper
was the highest throughout the period, except in 2013. Meanwhile, tins and garden
had the second lowest and the lowest Fix the agreement mistake
gardens
number
of waste collected over the period.
Regarding paper
, 57 tons
of paper
were collected in 2011. The amount
of it decreased by 17 tons
to 40 tons
in 2013, before increasing to 51 tons
in the following year. The figure for paper
reached a peak of 70 tons
in 2015. Turning to glass, a slight fall in the amount
of glass occurred from 48 tons
in 2011 to 41 tons
in 2012. However
, from 2013 to 2015, the figure for glass depicted a fluctuation between 46 tons
and 52 tons
.
From 2011 to 2014, the number
of tins fluctuated between 27 tons
and 35 tons
, before growing to 39 tons
at the end
. As far as the garden was concerned, the amount
of it dropped by half to 15 tons
in 2012 and that number
of garden
rose dramatically to 39 Fix the agreement mistake
gardens
tons
in 2015.Submitted by pandin21 on
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