An increasing number of domestic appliances (e.g., air purifiers and water purifiers) are on the market to tackle water pollution and air pollution. Why is this the case? Is this a positive indicator of the development of human beings? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, the market has been

floded

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flooded

with domestic appliances

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as

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air

purifiers

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and

water

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purifiers

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. These products are mainly used to lessen the

effect

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effects

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of

water

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and air

pollution

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. the reasons for

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development are the unavailability

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water

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and the effect of factories on a city. Both factors reflect a lack of consideration of human rights. The first reason is the lack of clean

water

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sources

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as

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rainwater

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water

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, lakes, rivers, and rivers.

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, some countries are forced to purify sea

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the

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they produce is not

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100

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pure.

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, The people in

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country opt for

water

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purifiers

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to make sure their

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is clean and drinkable.

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issue is mainly seen in developing countries because their sea

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is significantly

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affected

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by

pollution

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,

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the high numbers of trade ships sailing on their waters. Another reason

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is the unpredicted range of

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done by factories. In the past industrial areas

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built near

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, so for

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humans lived near

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chemical producers oblivious to their effects. Luckily, nowadays industrial areas are built away from

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,but that doesn’t mean that we escaped their effect. Studies have shown that some

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are suffering from the

pollution

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done by factories decades ago ;

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, people are required to wear masks and install air

purifiers

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in their houses. In conclusion, The domestic appliances sold in the market are a way for people to protect themselves because the

goverment

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government

was unable to provide them with pure

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, or because They built

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near industrial areas. Clearly, countries should

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harder to overcome

pollution

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; The necessity to buy appliances in order to survive is a demonstration of their disregard

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issue