The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
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The bar chart compares the percentages of weekly income in one area in 1968 and in 2018.
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families spent the amount of
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for their consumption in 1968 in 2018 for leisure was the highest spent in their budget. As a bar chart shows,during a week in 1968 35% of the budget was on food but it comes to 2018 about 17% of their budget was spent on food.For Housing spent 10% of the
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in 1968 but next 10 years, it was about 19% of the
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.Approximately 7% and 15% of
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was spent on transport in 1968 and 2018 respectively.About 7% of families' budgets were spent on leisure in 1968 and it comes to 2018 was about 22%.
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, for other all indexes spending
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was under 10% . In 1968 for fuel and power, clothing and personal goods spent
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about 6%, 10% and 8% respectively but it comes to 2018 5% and under 5% of
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spent.In both years household and goods spent
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the same percentage 7%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Expenditure
  • Consumption patterns
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spending
  • Inflation
  • Economic indicators
  • Demographics
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Technology advancements
  • Government policies
  • Consumerism
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Fiscal habits
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial priorities
  • Societal trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Income distribution
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