Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.
Human activity has
a
damage to different plants and animals. Some Remove the article
apply
people
strongly support that
is
cannot be changed, Correct your spelling
it
whereas
there
others believe that, with persistent Replace the word
their
working
to improve Replace the word
work
this
situation to better
side can be taken a change to Add an article
the better
positive
side.
One argument against Add an article
the positive
possibility
of reversing these Add an article
the possibility
effect
to Fix the agreement mistake
effects
better
situation and nature can't be saved from Correct article usage
a better
people
's threatness
. Correct your spelling
greatness
threats
For instance
, in certain countries such
India
, Pakistan, Bangladesh and Bhutan, there low indication of transportation Change preposition
as India
vegetables
and fruits to villages and poor areas, because Change preposition
of vegetables
the
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apply
such
persons
less important, because of Add a verb
persons are
persons were
this
, to
crops will receive little money from the government. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, deforestation will show significant
reducing wildlife habitats. Correct article usage
a significant
Furthermore
, in several regions, attitude
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attitudes
to
wildlife Change preposition
toward
is
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are
noticeable
bad, and Change the word
noticeably
they
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the
extinct
will not stop Replace the word
extinction
negative
trend. Add an article
the negative
However
, this
comes at a cost, as vehicle emissions contribute to air
pollution and climat
change, which in turn affects both plants and animal life.
Despite Correct your spelling
climate
this
challenges, there some groups of Correct determiner usage
these
people
claim that nature have
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has
chance
to save. Protecting and restoring natural habitats, Correct article usage
a chance
such
as forests, trees play a crucial role to support
stable and clear Change preposition
in supporting
air
in our world, they absorb carbon dioxide and allocate fresh air
. Moreover
, adopting sustainable agricultural practice
and utilizing alternative materials can reduce the reliance on deforestation. Governments Fix the agreement mistake
practices
also
people
they
obviously can get value Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
breathing Change preposition
from
with
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apply
safed
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safe
air
and save
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saving
they
health, Correct pronoun usage
their
following
this
they will start Correct pronoun usage
apply
assign
funds to improve wildlife and plantation. Increasing Wrong verb form
assigning
usage
of public transport and bikes for movement may Correct article usage
the usage
deacrease
toxic emissions to nature from Correct your spelling
decrease
any
cars. If Correct quantifier usage
apply
follow
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followed
to
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by
this
principe
, it can contribute to reversing environmental damage.
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principle
To conclude
, although
some argue that the negative impact of human activities on plants and animals inevitable
, Add a missing verb
is inevitable
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believe that through effective policies and individual actions, significant positive change is achievable. With a well-structured approach, it is possible to address and mitigate the adverse effects on our environment.Change the capitalization
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