Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.

Human activity has
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damage to different plants and animals. Some
people
strongly support
that
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cannot be changed,
whereas
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others believe that, with persistent
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to improve
this
situation to
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side can be taken a change to
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side. One argument against
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of reversing these
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to
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situation and nature can't be saved from
people
's
threatness
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greatness
threats
.
For instance
, in certain countries
such
India
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, Pakistan, Bangladesh and Bhutan, there low indication of transportation
vegetables
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and fruits to villages and poor areas, because
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such
persons
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less important, because of
this
,
to
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crops will receive little money from the government.
In addition
, deforestation will show
significant
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reducing wildlife habitats.
Furthermore
, in several regions,
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to
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wildlife
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noticeable
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bad, and
they
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extinct
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will not stop
negative
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trend.
However
,
this
comes at a cost, as vehicle emissions contribute to
air
pollution and
climat
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climate
change, which in turn affects both plants and animal life. Despite
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challenges, there some groups of
people
claim that nature
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chance
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to save. Protecting and restoring natural habitats,
such
as forests, trees play a crucial role
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stable and clear
air
in our world, they absorb carbon dioxide and allocate fresh
air
.
Moreover
, adopting sustainable agricultural
practice
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practices
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and utilizing alternative materials can reduce the reliance on deforestation. Governments
also
people
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obviously can get value
of
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breathing
with
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safed
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safe
air
and
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they
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health,
following
this
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they will start
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funds to improve wildlife and plantation. Increasing
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of public transport and bikes for movement may
deacrease
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decrease
toxic emissions to nature from
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cars. If
follow
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to
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this
principe
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principle
, it can contribute to reversing environmental damage.
To conclude
,
although
some argue that the negative impact of human activities on plants and animals
inevitable
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,
i
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believe that through effective policies and individual actions, significant positive change is achievable. With a well-structured approach, it is possible to address and mitigate the adverse effects on our environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • extinct
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • mitigate
  • reverse
  • stricter regulations
  • protected areas
  • endangered species
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • biodiversity
  • consequences
  • renewable energy sources
  • organic farming
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • natural ecosystems
  • preserve biodiversity
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