The map below is of the town Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.

The map illustrates the town of Garlsdon, with a population of 65,000, and shows two possible sites for a new supermarket,

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S1 and S2. Site S1 is located to the northwest, in the countryside near housing. It is adjacent to a main road, providing access to

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towns like Hindon (12 km away) and is near the railway line.

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, S1 is outside the town

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, possibly less convenient for some residents who live

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away. Its location in the countryside might

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attract more shoppers from surrounding areas. Site S2 is in the town

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, within the no-traffic zone, surrounded by housing and the industrial area, and closer to the railway. Its central location makes it more accessible, though the no-traffic zone could complicate access for car users.

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, S2 would likely benefit from the high pedestrian traffic in the area.

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, both sites offer proximity to population

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but differ in accessibility, potential footfall, and ease of transportation for shoppers.

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The map below is of the town Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows possible sites for the supermarket.

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