People have different views on how to reduce traffic congestion by governments. Some think it can be solved by building more train and subway lines, while others believe building more roads and widening existing roads will reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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more

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and

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lines leads to decreased

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traffic

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. I will explain why building

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more vital than expanding the current road.

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a key method of transportation recently.

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the fact that low-income groups could utilise it without incurring a high cost.

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increases

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stays

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constant until the

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train

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, constructing more

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stations would benefit more in terms of the cost from the perspective of customers to solve

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.

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, installing new

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lines would be more easily to be projected by the government.

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reason is that the area of land required to purchase for building more stations is lower than renovating the road in present.

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, roads could be hard to connect in a

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forests

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are restricted

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the green belt.

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, some people may claim that there are more drivers on the street than people in the station, which would solve

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by creating more

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. Apparently, the statistic shows that statement is true in terms of the number.

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, it doesn't take tourists into

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account as the majority of tourists prefer

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public transport over renting a car. Having considered both views, making new

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stations would be more important to solve

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.

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, I would suggest that imposing

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congestion

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could reduce the usage of

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the car

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during a busy

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holiday

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