You live in a block of flats; your neighbour makes a lot of noise which has caused problems for you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, you should: explain the situation tell him/her how you are effected by this Suggest what you want the landlord to do.

Dear Mr. Smith, My name is Sophia Brown, tenant of one of your flats. To be more
specify
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, I live
in
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6532 Stiven Avenue,
Kitchner
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Kitchener
, Ontario. The purpose of writing
this
letter is
complaint
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a complaint
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about my noisy neighbour. Who lives in
nextdoor
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next door
to me
.
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I want to tell you that, my daughter is 2 years old and she is not able to sleep
due to
late night voice from my neighbourhood. My neighbours
did
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party
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every
weeekends
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weekends
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about
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3 to 4 am
late
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night
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.
additionally
, they invited too
much guest
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who
also
makes
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made
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noise very loudly. My daughter
as well as
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headache
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and Insomnia
due to
heavy
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volume of them.
Moreover
,
next
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day I have office
due to
lack of sleep I am not able to concentrate on my work.
This
become every
weekends
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problem. I kindly request you that take some strict
acction
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action
against them or tell them in loud words about
this
problem,
otherwise
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ask them to
shift
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their home from your apartment. I hope you will take some action against
this
as soon as possible. Yours
cincerely
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sincerely
, Sophia Brown.
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grammar
Work on grammar and punctuation to improve clarity and professionalism.
task response
Provide more specific suggestions for what the landlord can do, such as setting quiet hours or mediating a discussion.
task response
You addressed all parts of the prompt and explained your situation well.
greeting and closing
Your letter includes an appropriate greeting and closing, which contributes positively to the tone.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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