You recently stayed at hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel managment to complain include: •where you stayed •what the problem were •how they can fix your complains

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Dear sir or madam I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the hotel service and conditions. I recently stayed at a hotel for a conference

however

have several problems. The first thing I would like to draw your attention

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my room is on the 30th

floor

, the elevator doesn't go up to the 30th

floor

it stops at the 25th

floor

. To make matters worse the elevator is very slow.

Secondly

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in addition

this

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this,

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the hotel's food delivery service is not it takes me a long time to get downstairs because

am getting ready for a conference.

am not at all pleased that. To solve the problem if possible

would appreciate it fix the elevator or give me a room from

lower

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floor

third

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or fourth

floor

won't need

delivery

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the delivery

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. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your

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Yours

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faithfully Turayeva Rayhona

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suitable writing tone

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

151 words

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