You are going to visit New Zealand for an 'English and Homestay ' program. You have just received details of your homestay host family. Write your first letter to the family.In your letter •introduce yourself • ask the family some questions to get information that is important to you •tell the family about your arrival date and time

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Dear Sir or Madam I am Umid from Uzbekistan, have recently registered for a two-week English Homestay program at your house in New Zealand. I am fascinated to have you as my mentor during the program. I really appreciate your letter that I received yesterday and writing for some information and to notify you of my arrival date I am really delighted that you have agreed to host me for the program.

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will definitely enable me to fully immerse myself in the English Culture and

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enhance my understanding of your tradition and way of life. Would you please

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me about New Zealand's weather

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Because I don't know what kind of clothes I should bring

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I would

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like to inform you that I am a vegetarian.

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, I need your suggestion about the things I should bring with me to your house .

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, I would appreciate your advice on the type of books I should read about New Zealand that might help me understand your culture I look

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to hearing from you

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faithfully Umid

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

180 words

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