You share your room with another studer in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or She always has parties and friends visiting. write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.

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Dear [hostel warden], it is commonly believed,

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am sharing a

room

with another student

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have

greatful

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sharing a

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came

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bake from school

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have seen

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my roommate there

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parties

everyday

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when there are finished classes from school

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although

althought

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was invited

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friends from school came

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room

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make

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me annoying

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could not

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my homework and they

make

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louder

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sound in a

room

is make

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me can not rest I would like to report about my roommate she

have

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not

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the rules. to be sure

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request assistant from the hostel warden it is displeasure for me

pleases

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task achievement

Ensure spelling and grammar accuracy to create a professional impression.

coherence cohesion

Use clear paragraphing to separate different points or ideas.

task achievement

Maintain a consistent and polite tone throughout the letter.

task achievement

The letter covers the main issue effectively and conveys the author's frustration.

coherence cohesion

You have a clear opening and closing to the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

128 words

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You share your room with another studer in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or She always has parties and friends visiting. write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.

The Closing

A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might these differences cause? How might these problems be reduced?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.