You share your room with another studer in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or She always has parties and friends visiting. write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.

Dear [hostel warden], it is commonly believed,
i
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am sharing a
room
with another student
Additionally
i
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have
greatful
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grateful
to
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sharing a
room
with another student.
However
,
Everyday
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when I
came
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bake from school
moreover
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have seen
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my roommate there
has
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have
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parties
everyday
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when there are finished classes from school
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although
althought
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Although
he
was invited
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friends from school came
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to
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into
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a
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room
as well
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as
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it
make
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makes
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me annoying
i
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could not
did
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my homework and they
make
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louder
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a louder
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sound in a
room
it
is make
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me can not rest I would like to report about my roommate she
have
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has
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not
follow
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followed
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the rules. to be sure
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i
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request assistant from the hostel warden it is displeasure for me
pleases
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to please
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you
able
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to discontinue
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before
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issue
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task achievement
Ensure spelling and grammar accuracy to create a professional impression.
coherence cohesion
Use clear paragraphing to separate different points or ideas.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and polite tone throughout the letter.
task achievement
The letter covers the main issue effectively and conveys the author's frustration.
coherence cohesion
You have a clear opening and closing to the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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