You share your room with another studer in the college hostel. You find it very difficult to study there because he or She always has parties and friends visiting. write a letter to the hostel warden complaining about your displeasure with the roommate.
Dear [hostel warden],
it is commonly believed,
i
am sharing a Change the capitalization
I
room
with another student Additionally
i
have Change the capitalization
I
greatful
Correct your spelling
grateful
to
sharing a Change preposition
for
room
with another student.However
, Everyday
when I Replace the word
every day
came
bake from school Add the particle
came to
moreover
i
Change the capitalization
I
have seen
my roommate there Wrong verb form
saw
has
parties Change the verb form
have
everyday
when there are finished classes from school Replace the word
every day
Correct your spelling
although
althought
he Correct your spelling
Although
was invited
friends from school came Change the verb form
has invited
Change preposition
into
to
Change preposition
into
Correct article usage
the
a
Correct article usage
the
room
as well
Correct word choice
apply
as
it Correct word choice
apply
make
me annoying Change the verb form
makes
i
could not Change the capitalization
I
did
my homework and they Change the verb form
do
make
Wrong verb form
made
louder
sound in a Add an article
a louder
the louder
room
it is make
me can not rest I would like to report about my roommate she Change the verb form
makes
have
not Change the verb form
has
follow
the rules. to be sure Change the verb form
followed
Additionally
Add a comma
Additionally,
i
request assistant from the hostel warden it is displeasure for me Change the capitalization
I
pleases
youChange the verb form
to please
able
to discontinue Correct word choice
apply
conflict
before Correct article usage
the conflict
colossal
issueCorrect determiner usage
this colossal
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task achievement
Ensure spelling and grammar accuracy to create a professional impression.
coherence cohesion
Use clear paragraphing to separate different points or ideas.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and polite tone throughout the letter.
task achievement
The letter covers the main issue effectively and conveys the author's frustration.
coherence cohesion
You have a clear opening and closing to the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,