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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph represents the amount of commodities transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four modes of transport.
Overall
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, almost all the given categories exhibited an upward trend, with the exception of carriage by rail. After nearly three decades, people began to make use of
railway
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the railway
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 system more frequently to deliver goods after a small drop. On closer examination, approximately 4 million tonnes of deliveries were carried by ships and trains in 1974.
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,
this
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 figure increased by half in 2002.
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, the transportation through the pipelines was evaluated
less
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at less
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 than 10 billion kilograms. But, we can observe that it doubled during the period.
As the
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The
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 conveyance
products
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of products
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 by
vehicles
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vehicle
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 was the favourite way for the population in
1970's
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the 1970's
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. Following 1994,
this
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 method gained more significant popularity, demonstrating a marked increase to nearly 100 billion kilograms.
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