You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • Explain the situation • Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the
camera
which I bought from your company
last
week ago.
I'm dissatisfied that I bought the camera
because the camera
is not working. I am a customer. Last
week I bought the camera
from your store. When I got it
home, I found a few problems. I tried to work the Correct pronoun usage
apply
camera
, Correct word choice
but unfortunately
unfortunately
I couldn'Add a comma
unfortunately,
t
.
The problem is the camera
is not working.Then
I returned the camera
to the company
. I spoke to the company
representative a week ago, and I waited. But the camera
didn't
repair.
Unfortunately, customers are sad with
your Change preposition
about
company
because your company
sells
that not working. If you don'Correct your spelling
sales
t
stop this
situation, nobody won't
buy your things. You should sell quality things .I look forward to hearing from you .
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
AzizbekCorrect your spelling
Yours
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task achievement
Add more specifics to your situations to make your description clearer, like what specific issues the camera had.
task achievement
Ensure your tone remains polite and professional throughout, especially when conveying dissatisfaction.
coherence cohesion
Consider creating separate paragraphs for each part of your letter: introduction, explanation of the situation, and your request to improve readability.
coherence cohesion
Try to avoid repetitive phrasing such as 'last week' and 'I bought the camera,' and ensure your sentences are varied in structure.
greeting and closing
The letter opens and closes appropriately, with a salutation and sign-off.
task achievement
The letter addresses all parts of the task: you introduce yourself, explain the situation, and state what action you want.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite