You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the
production
of milk annually in four countries Netherlands
, Australia
, Tanzania and Guatemala, over the course of 20 years, between 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, Netherlands
reached the maximum Correct article usage
the Netherlands
amount
in litres with 11,466,000 in 2010, while
the lowest was Guatemala with 84,000 amount
in litres in 2010.
To begin
with, Netherlands
and Correct article usage
the Netherlands
Australia
were nearly the same amount
in 1990 ( 11,262,000 and 11,246,000 respectively ), Change the noun form
amounts
However
, in 2000 Netherlands
and Australia
showed a decreased
in the Replace the word
decrease
production
of milk with 11,155,000 for Netherlands
and 11,105,000 for Correct article usage
the Netherlands
Australia
, Therefore
, in 2010 Netherlands
had increased the Correct article usage
the Netherlands
amount
of milk with 11,466,000 while
Australia
had a decreased the production
with 9,165,000.
On the other hand
, Tanzania had
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
the
Change the word
its
production
in the all period starting from 87,000 in 1990, 1,42,000 in 2000 and 1,55,00 in 2010, in Addition
, Guatemala also
increased the
Change the word
its
production
with 26,000 in 1990, 55,000 in 2000 and 84,000 in 2010.Submitted by aziz1dakhil on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, netherlands, australia, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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