The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables compare the
amount
of
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five different European
countries
in 1999 and 2004 in millions of
euros
. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the
sales
rose dramatically in most
countries
for both products.
Also
, it is apparent that Switzerland citizens have bought more bananas and coffee compared to other
countries
. By looking at the table for
sales
of coffee, the
sales
in the UK rose sharply from 1999 to 2004.
While
the
amount
of
sales
was 1.5
million
euros
in 1999, it reached 20
million
. For Switzerland, the value became doubled that of 1999, 6
million
euros
.
However
, the changes for other
countries
were not so substantial.
While
the
amount
for Belgium changed to 1.7
million
euros
from 1
million
, the
amount
of
sales
for both Denmark and Sweden experienced a 0.2
million
euros
increase, from 1.8 and 0.8 to 2 and 1, respectively. Regarding the table about bananas, the
sales
in Switzerland increased from 15
million
euros
to 47
million
euros
.
Also
, the change for the UK was significant, it rose from 1 to 5.5
million
euros
.
While
the
amount
for Belgium jumped from 0.6 to 4, Sweden and Denmark experienced a decrease, from 1.8 and 2 to 1 and 0.9
million
euros
, respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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