The table below shows average climate conditions in Dak Lak province, Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows average climate conditions in Dak Lak province, Vietnam.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
An initial analysis of
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demonstrates average weather
condititions
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conditions
throughout 12
month
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months
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in Dak Lak province, Vietnam.
Overall
, the highest
temperafure
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temperature
and longest
sunhine
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sunshine
are seen to be in spring.
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rainfall mm and
peak
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the peak
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of
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humidity are
exposured
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exposed
by the advent of autumn.The bottom indicators for all 4 stand in the
last
and first month of a year. In December and
January
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January,
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weather remains at its mildest
21.2
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and 21.4 celcium, promply increasing to 26 celcium in
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April
and May. The
sun light
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sunlight
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,
however
, is brief during August and September, but excessive in March nearly twice at 270 hrs. Barely rain drops in
Febrary
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February
at 1mm, meanwhile from May rain season begins and is severe in September at 434 mm.Humidity is always high in Dak Lak, the lowest
percentege
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percentage
is 73 in March and 89
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August.
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