Task 1 Question: The chart below shows the results of a survey people coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
The pie chart provides key information about the result of survival for
people
habitats in drinking and buying Change noun form
people's
coffee
and tea in five Australian cities. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Melbourne has a significant percentage about
Change preposition
of
people
went
to the Correct pronoun usage
who went
cafe
in the last
four weeks,with nearly two-thirds. In addition
,Hobart had large
amount of Change the article
a large
people
went
to the Correct pronoun usage
who went
cafe
about 63 proportion , whereas
people
who bought coffee
had nearly 55 per cent.
According to
what is shown,Sydnian people
demonstrated a
highest portion In went to Change the article
the
cafe
by approximately 62%Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
while
bought fresh coffee
had less than 45 per cent. Melbourne had the majority people
who went to the Change preposition
of people
cafe
, with around 63 ratio
, compared to other cities.
In terms of, Brisbane and Adelaide, had an equivalent portion in bought fresh Change to a plural noun
ratios
coffee
.while
Brisbane demonstrated at
56 ratioCorrect your spelling
a
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, coffee, cafe with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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