The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010.(rewrite)
The table shows the percentage of adults from urban and rural
areas
who participated in four different leisure activities—reading, animated plays, playing, and photography—in 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, reading was the most popular leisure activity
in both
urban and rural areas
for both
years. The other activities showed varying degrees of popularity, with noticeable changes over time, particularly in urban areas
, while
rural trends remained relatively stable.
In 1990, reading accounted for the highest percentage of participants in rural areas
at 71%, followed by playing at 26%, and animated plays at 18%. In urban areas
, reading was also
the most popular activity
at 61%, with playing at 21%, and animated plays slightly lower. Photography was the least preferred activity
in both
regions, but rural participation
was double that of urban areas
, at 14%.
By 2010, the trends had shifted. Reading remained highly popular, with participation
rates rising to 78% in both
urban and rural areas
. Photography gained popularity, increasing by 10% in both
groups. While
playing remained constant in rural areas
at 26%, it dropped to 14% among urban adults. Animated plays saw a decline in rural areas
by 4%, while
urban participation
remained the same.
In conclusion, reading consistently remained the most favored
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favoured
activity
across both
regions and years, while
the other activities experienced varying levels of participation
, with notable changes especially
in urban Add the comma(s)
, especially
areas
over the 20-year period.Submitted by kamonluck1999 on
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