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The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010.(rewrite)

The table below shows the percentage of adults in urban and rural areas who took part in four free time activities in 1990 and 2010.(rewrite)
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The table shows the percentage of adults from urban and rural
areas
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 who participated in four different leisure activities—reading, animated plays, playing, and photography—in 1990 and 2010.
Overall
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, reading was the most popular leisure
activity
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 in
both
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 urban and rural
areas
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 for
both
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 years. The other activities showed varying degrees of popularity, with noticeable changes over time, particularly in urban
areas
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,
while
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 rural trends remained relatively stable. In 1990, reading accounted for the highest percentage of participants in rural
areas
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 at 71%, followed by playing at 26%, and animated plays at 18%. In urban
areas
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, reading was
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 the most popular
activity
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 at 61%, with playing at 21%, and animated plays slightly lower. Photography was the least preferred
activity
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 in
both
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 regions, but rural
participation
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 was double that of urban
areas
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, at 14%. By 2010, the trends had shifted. Reading remained highly popular, with
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 rates rising to 78% in
both
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 urban and rural
areas
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. Photography gained popularity, increasing by 10% in
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 groups.
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 playing remained constant in rural
areas
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 at 26%, it dropped to 14% among urban adults. Animated plays saw a decline in rural
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 by 4%,
while
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 urban
participation
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 remained the same. In conclusion, reading consistently remained the most
favored
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activity
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 across
both
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 regions and years,
while
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 the other activities experienced varying levels of
participation
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, with notable changes
especially
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, especially
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 in urban
areas
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 over the 20-year period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, activity, both, participation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 5 times.
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