The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph
dipicts
the information Correct your spelling
depicts
of
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on
grown ups
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grown-ups
participating
in various major sports in a place, in years the 1997 and 2017.
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participation
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on
the top game played by Change preposition
as
highest
number of Add an article
the highest
individuals
in both Use synonyms
the
years. basketball was played by least in Correct article usage
apply
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year
the 1997 and cricket Add an article
the year
stands
at Wrong verb form
stood
bottom
in the Add an article
the bottom
year
2017
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, Tennis is most played by Linking Words
yound
adults Correct your spelling
young
that is
fifty Linking Words
thousand
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individuals
played Use synonyms
in
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it in
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year
1997 and around Change the article
the year
fiftyfive
people played Correct your spelling
fifty five
fifty-five
in
the Correct pronoun usage
it in
year
2017. In 1997 basketball was played by 9 Use synonyms
thousand
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individuals
and Use synonyms
lowest
is cricket stands at the lowest with 80thousand Correct article usage
the lowest
individuals
playing.
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Secondly
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drastic
increase in Add an article
a drastic
the drastic
individuals
playing Football and Rugby was observed in the Use synonyms
year
2017 compared with Use synonyms
individauls
playing in 1997. Correct your spelling
individuals
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matured
humans participating in swimming Replace the word
mature
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
same
for both Correct article usage
the same
the
years which is around Correct article usage
apply
thirtyfive
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thirty-five
thirty five
thousand
. and Use synonyms
individuals
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experiancing
Golf Correct your spelling
experiencing
is
slightly increased in Unnecessary verb
apply
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year
2017 from 1997 by Change the article
the year
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thousand
participations.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
a thousand
individals
playing sports increased in Correct your spelling
individuals
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year
2017 in Change the article
the year
comparosion
with Correct your spelling
comparison
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year
1997. Change the article
the year
However
, Linking Words
its
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it's
it is
opposite
for cricket.Correct article usage
the opposite
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