The maps bellow show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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report derives from the maps which enumerate the recent changes in the region of Kimsville between 2002 and the present. A glance at the illustrations clearly reveals that the overall
proclivities encountered modernization and sophistication, with an elimination of the factory which was located in the eastern part of the city. Furthermore
, by reducing the part of the natural environment, the city became more urbanized.
To be specific, in comparison to the past, the area now possesses more cutting-edge facilities including a software company, new apartments on the north-western side of the town and the new train station right next to the city centre. To recapitulate, there is a significant change in the transportation service and accommodation facility.
Also
, the former outdated cinema has been converted into a pub and the initial south-western forest was replaced by a football stadium.
Similar to the earlier arrangement, the current design still includes the shopping centre with the same location in the area.Submitted by rainbowlck on
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