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The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.

The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.
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The graph provides information about the percentage of people in a country who used public
transport
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 in 2016, broken down by
age
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group
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 and type of residence - large
city
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 compared to other areas. By far, the most striking feature of the graph is the high percentage of large
city
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residents
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 aged 31-45 who used public
transport
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, peaking at 68%.
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, other
residents
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 did not reach
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 high numbers, with the highest percentage being the 16-30
age
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group
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 at 28%. At the same time, both types of
residents
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 show lower percentages of public
transport
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 usage among older
age
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 groups.
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, only 10% of large
city
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 inhabitants aged 61-75 used public
transport
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,
whereas
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 other
residents
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 over 76 years old remained at 7%. Notably, there is a significant decline in public
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 usage among
big
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big-city
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city
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 locals from the peak of 68% in the 31-45
age
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group
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 to just 10% in the 61-75
age
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group
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. In fact,
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 decline is even steeper than that observed among other
residents
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 of the same
age
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, whose usage remains just above 20%.
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, the other inhabitants' numbers remained approximately the same
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31
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the 31
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-45 and 46-60 generation
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, at 15%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, age, group, city, residents with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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