The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.

The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one country, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.
The graph provides information about the percentage of people in a country who used public
transport
in 2016, broken down by
age
group
and type of residence - large
city
compared to other areas. By far, the most striking feature of the graph is the high percentage of large
city
residents
aged 31-45 who used public
transport
, peaking at 68%.
In contrast
, other
residents
did not reach
such
high numbers, with the highest percentage being the 16-30
age
group
at 28%. At the same time, both types of
residents
show lower percentages of public
transport
usage among older
age
groups.
For instance
, only 10% of large
city
inhabitants aged 61-75 used public
transport
,
whereas
other
residents
over 76 years old remained at 7%. Notably, there is a significant decline in public
transport
usage among
big
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city
locals from the peak of 68% in the 31-45
age
group
to just 10% in the 61-75
age
group
. In fact,
this
decline is even steeper than that observed among other
residents
of the same
age
, whose usage remains just above 20%.
Moreover
, the other inhabitants' numbers remained approximately the same
at
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both
31
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-45 and 46-60 generation
category
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, at 15%.
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