The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the outcome of a survey questionnaire regarding
coffee
and tea purchasing and consuming routines of five Australian city residents, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane
, Adelaide
and Hobart
in the last
four weeks. Units are measured in percentage
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the proportion of people who went to a cafe for coffee
or tea acounted
for the highest Correct your spelling
accounted
counted
proportional
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proportion
figure
in all cities
except Adelaide
in the period given. Furthermore
, the percentage
of those bought
instant Correct pronoun usage
who bought
coffee
mostly rated second and the figure
for the residents who bought fresh coffee
always scored third in all cities
.
Firstly
, the percentage
of residents drinking coffee
or tea in a cafe in the last
four weeks registered above 60% in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart
and stood exactly at 55% in Brisbane
. Meanwhile, the figure
was slightly below 50% in Adelaide
which is the only city that
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in
this
category comes
in Correct pronoun usage
that comes
the
second place.
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apply
Secondly
, the proportion of people who bought instant coffee
in the recorded period scored second in all cities
except Adelaide
in which it stood exactly at 50%, accounting for the first place. The figure
in all five cities
was 45% or more and most noticeable were Brisbane
and Hobart
by
registering well above 50%.
Change preposition
apply
Thirdly
, the percentage
of citizens who bought fresh coffee
in the entire period recorded the lowest rate in all cities
. The figure
was above 40% in Sydney and Melbourne and below 35% in Brisbane
and Adelaide
. Moreover
, the number stood at around 38% in Hobart
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, brisbane, adelaide, hobart, percentage, figure, cities with synonyms.
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