The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the outcome of a survey questionnaire regarding
coffee
and tea purchasing and consuming routines of five Australian city residents, namely Sydney, Melbourne,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
and
Hobart
in the
last
four weeks. Units are measured in
percentage
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the proportion of people who went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea
acounted
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accounted
counted
for the highest
proportional
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figure
in all
cities
except
Adelaide
in the period given.
Furthermore
, the
percentage
of those
bought
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who bought
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instant
coffee
mostly rated second and the
figure
for the residents who bought fresh
coffee
always scored third in all
cities
.
Firstly
, the
percentage
of residents drinking
coffee
or tea in a cafe in the
last
four weeks registered above 60% in Sydney, Melbourne and
Hobart
and stood exactly at 55% in
Brisbane
. Meanwhile, the
figure
was slightly below 50% in
Adelaide
which is the only city
that
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in
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this
category
comes
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that comes
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in
the
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apply
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second place.
Secondly
, the proportion of people who bought instant
coffee
in the recorded period scored second in all
cities
except
Adelaide
in which it stood exactly at 50%, accounting for the first place. The
figure
in all five
cities
was 45% or more and most noticeable were
Brisbane
and
Hobart
by
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registering well above 50%.
Thirdly
, the
percentage
of citizens who bought fresh
coffee
in the entire period recorded the lowest rate in all
cities
. The
figure
was above 40% in Sydney and Melbourne and below 35% in
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
.
Moreover
, the number stood at around 38% in
Hobart
.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.

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